Persuasive writing

This term in my literacy group we have been working on persuasive writing. At the start we had to make an advert and make a draft of our persuasive writing. After that we had to make our actually persuasive writing, we had to   pick what the subject of our writing would be out of these, palm oil plantations need to be stopped, why Toroa should have school caps instead of bucket hats and, why families should spend more time together. I chose why families should spend more time together.
here is my finished persuasive writing