Hey!
This week in literacy we had to write the discussion and conclusion for our experiments. we did a vinegar and baking soda experiment but changed out the vinegar and baking soda, with recommended substitutes. we put vinegar in a bottle and put baking soda in a balloon then we put the balloon over the nozzle over the bottle and the baking soda fell in. Once the reaction started it created a gas to blow up the balloon then whatever balloon is most blown up we will know their ingredients had the best reaction.
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Hey Mia!
ReplyDeleteThis is a good post! From what I read your experiment sounds interesting, but you haven't told us anything about it, just the results. What were your questions? What were you testing? I also noticed the photo of your discussion and conclusion is quite small, and hard to read even when zoomed in, maybe make it slightly bigger next time, also, you spelt egg, eg once in the discussion.
Other than those few things, this was a really good post! I liked how you presented it. Keep up the good work.
- Jayde
Hi Mia,
ReplyDeleteThis report looks really good and you did a good job of telling us the results. Maybe next time you could tell us a bit about what your experiment was about or if it was fun or not, as well as some photos. Your last sentence doesn't really make much sense at the start, other then that it was really good.
Hey Mia!
ReplyDeleteYour experiment seemed really interesting! You wrote it out very well and how you organised it was really good too. I think you added some good statements in the discussion and conclusion.
~ Gaia :3 (I'm anonymous because it won't let me sign in:()